brickmasterben11

(GBW)-CP2-Refnor-Interception

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A Briolui supply truck rumbles down a makeshift road towards an artillery position. Little do the escorting soldiers know that a few meters away Refnor troops wait behind a brick wall.

34956095335_975689cb9f_s.jpgDSC02374 by Brickmasterben11, on Flickr

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34956100295_b52f61fe8b_s.jpgDSC02379 by Brickmasterben11, on Flickr

Not about to miss their chance, the Refnor troops spring upon the supply truck.

34956107485_104a01cf82_s.jpgDSC02383 by Brickmasterben11, on Flickr

34956109295_3cceeb2075_s.jpgDSC02385 by Brickmasterben11, on Flickr

34956110025_1bc2bb825f_s.jpgDSC02387 by Brickmasterben11, on Flickr

After his escort was taken out, the driver surrenders and opens the truck to the victorious soldiers.

34956111385_e3ec6a1440_s.jpgDSC02389 by Brickmasterben11, on Flickr

34823990031_4cf40b7857_s.jpgDSC02390 by Brickmasterben11, on Flickr

The soldiers open the crate to find a stash of weapons that were headed to defend the Briolui artillery. 

34823990681_e7ec6a9935_s.jpgDSC02391 by Brickmasterben11, on Flickr

34823991441_c85d2a94f4_s.jpgDSC02392 by Brickmasterben11, on Flickr

The soldiers gather weapons and disappear back into the plains to wait for another truck....

Sorry if the pictures are unfocused or grainy, I am more experienced with building than photography it appears. :sceptic:

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I like the story and that you tried to keep the type of the Briolui uniforms as we know them (in Tan). Try to add more light when you photograph your creations.

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Hi!

The story is ok and according to the campaign plot. The truck is right, it´s a pity Lego doesn´t make an 8-stud windscreen.

I don´t know whether you used a mobile phone or a digital camera to take the pics; maybe some settings can be changed and the final result will improve. 

Bye and good job!

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You've Been Awarded (4  ) Point(s):

Judges Comments (not all judges comment):

The problem here lies in my inability to see what's actually going on. The story you're telling sounds great, but the focus here is the building. From what I'm able to see it looks like you did something decent, but I can't really see it all. Your photos need some help. Please PM one of the admins for advice on this, it will benefit you tremendously.    

No need to make excuses, let's get those photos lookin' good!  So light, you need to have light.  Your pictures, they have little to no light.  And while we are on the topic of your pictures, make sure you make them large enough that people can see them.  Your post should show everything people need to see from your post.  They shouldn't have to go to flickr to view the pics...so I would say when posting, make them medium size.  I like that you have a background, but mny of your pic exceed the background; I see a window, a wall, a family picture?  Your builds themself have potential, but if they cannot be seen, then that doesn't do you any good.  I would say if you are building terrain, and more changes in elevation; the real world is not flat!  More than one plate shows change, one plate difference is not enough...it's just tall grass!  Vehicles are tricky, but I like where you are going.  Keep them small enough to serve their purpose, but at the same time, you want to be able to detail them, but not put too much on them.

You can Update your AAR Post with your points to keep track.

Thanks for Playing!

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