The Hinckley Chronicles, Part One.

[ExoBuilder]

Hello!

What you are about to view, will be terrifying, exctiting, heartbreaking...Ok, it will be none of the above, I think 8-|

I'm just going to give youguys the Brickshelf link because I tried addin all of the pics at once, it was a mess.

Please don't hate me for this :-$

Yay, comic!

Thanks to Hinckley, Sinner, Pirahna, DJ Force, And the two mystery men. 8-|

What do you think?

*sweet*

Edit: Thanks Sinner, you da man!

Edited February 2, 2008 by Exobuilder

[Siegfried]

Gee. You expect me to click wait click 75 times? :-| I'd rather write a program that will do it for me! X-D Enjoy everyone!

[ExoBuilder]

I owe my life to you Sinner *wub* *y*

Expect me to make a vignette for you! *y*

What did you think of it?

*sweet*

[Batbrick]

A very well made comic Exobuilder, you are getting better at these. The photography is great, and the sets are too. Interesting story, it'll be intriguing to find out who took Mr Bunny finally. My one criticism is a lack of proper structure in the dialogue, I think a conversation needs to take place rather then a few short sentences and random happenings ;-)

Apart from that, this is a nice little comic, bring on the next one!

Batbrick Away! >:-)

[Hinckley]

:-/ My megablocks always looks so big on camera.

*wub* Great job, Exobuilder. I like how Sinner gets dumber each frame. Ah, DJ Force, the hobo with the poisoned pizzas who gets mugged and dumped in a boat in a pond. Everyone knows a guy like that. Getting chained up and thrown in a garbage truck reminds me of last weekend when I went to the bars with some friends. :-$ I wonder what will happen next. Keep up the fun!

BTW, in the future if you're not a smart like Sinner, which no one else really is, and you can't write a program to pull links, you can copy the same link 75 times and then go through and manually change the number at the end of each url. Saves a lot of time over copying and pasting each one...

[Siegfried]

It's a scary world in the mind of Exobuilder! :-D Why would someone want Hinckley? *wacko* Why does your roof vanish in frame 54? 8-

[Axle]

I laughed at "Don't worry guys, it's not poisoned any more! *sing* X-D

[zero1312]

Very good as always, EB! *y* :-D :-D

Is there a chance for me in part two? *sweet*

[Lt. Veers]

Another great comic.

Ya know, you really need to strap that pizza company with a lawsuit.

[Lord Of Pies]

Very funny, great photography as usual!

Nice plot, I like the cliffhanger and various whackings. Perhaps speech bubbles might be more effective, and have text as a narrative? I was disappointed at the lack of pies inside your house though, I mean pizza! C'mon pie is much more delicious! ;-) Overall great job and I look forward to the next episode! :-$

[WesternOutlaw]

Interesting to say the least. I shall be patiently awaiting part 2 of this rather strange mystery.

So, what do we know, and who are the suspects???

A mysterious Broke-Back Fiddler seen on the roof.

A Pizza Hut delivery guy who delivers poison pizzas within 30 minutes. (ok, I just made up the 30 minutes thing).

A mysterious Phez-like pirate who lurks in the shadows kills the pizza guy.

Two rogue garbage men bandits abduct Hink (ok, that's not that strange :-D ).

And lastly, a mysterious map is found in the Hink Headquarters. Perhaps it may lead to Grave Stone... :'-(

Yes, a mystery is brewing...

Early suspicions lead me to believe that the Walrus did it. ;-)

[AgentRick]

Good job. I should go edit Eurobrick's Adventures 1 and the soon to be released second issue now.

[ExoBuilder]

A very well made comic Exobuilder, you are getting better at these. The photography is great, and the sets are too. Interesting story, it'll be intriguing to find out who took Mr Bunny finally. My one criticism is a lack of proper structure in the dialogue, I think a conversation needs to take place rather then a few short sentences and random happenings ;-)

Apart from that, this is a nice little comic, bring on the next one!

Batbrick Away! >:-)

Thanks Batbrick. I will try to post the next one next week, any chance of you using your fancy program to help me Sinner?

I really do need to learn how to make speech bubbles, does anyone know how to on Photoshop?

Thanks!

:-/ My megablocks always looks so big on camera.

*wub* Great job, Exobuilder. I like how Sinner gets dumber each frame. Ah, DJ Force, the hobo with the poisoned pizzas who gets mugged and dumped in a boat in a pond. Everyone knows a guy like that. Getting chained up and thrown in a garbage truck reminds me of last weekend when I went to the bars with some friends. :-$ I wonder what will happen next. Keep up the fun!

BTW, in the future if you're not a smart like Sinner, which no one else really is, and you can't write a program to pull links, you can copy the same link 75 times and then go through and manually change the number at the end of each url. Saves a lot of time over copying and pasting each one...

I'll try fixing your personal camera problem 8-|

I still don't understand why I ordered Djs pizza again, the same thing has happened everytime :-|

Hmm, thank for thee tip, I'll probaly use that next time

I'm glad you liked my comic Hink, that's alot coming from you.

It's a scary world in the mind of Exobuilder! :-D Why would someone want Hinckley? *wacko* Why does your roof vanish in frame 54? 8-

[Lord Of Pies]

If someone could tell me how to add speech bubbles in Photoshop, I would!

Pies? Is there not one on the roof? X-D

My god you are right! 8-

[ExoBuilder]

Interesting to say the least. I shall be patiently awaiting part 2 of this rather strange mystery.

So, what do we know, and who are the suspects???

A mysterious Broke-Back Fiddler seen on the roof.

A Pizza Hut delivery guy who delivers poison pizzas within 30 minutes. (ok, I just made up the 30 minutes thing).

A mysterious Phez-like pirate who lurks in the shadows kills the pizza guy.

Two rogue garbage men bandits abduct Hink (ok, that's not that strange :-D ).

And lastly, a mysterious map is found in the Hink Headquarters. Perhaps it may lead to Grave Stone... :'-(

Yes, a mystery is brewing...

Early suspicions lead me to believe that the Walrus did it. ;-)

Thanks for the roundup, I'd also like to know what everyone else thinks *y*

Good job. I should go edit Eurobrick's Adventures 1 and the soon to be released second issue now.

Ooh, I'm looking forward to it!

My god you are right! 8-

[AgentRick]

Thanks Batbrick. I will try to post the next one next week, any chance of you using your fancy program to help me Sinner?

I really do need to learn how to make speech bubbles, does anyone know how to on Photoshop?

Thanks!

I just use Paintbrush on a Mac, But all I do is just draw an oval, and put in the text. I've never used Photoshop before, so I'm not sure if that might work :-$ .

[Asuka]

Looks like the start of a great adventure! *y*

[WesternOutlaw]

If only this mystery was on a ship...

OK, OK, never mind :-| .

[ExoBuilder]

I just use Paintbrush on a Mac, But all I do is just draw an oval, and put in the text. I've never used Photoshop before, so I'm not sure if that might work :-$ .

Hmm, I don't know if that helps as much, but thanks!

Looks like the start of a great adventure! *y*

Thanks Asuka! *y*

If only this mystery was on a ship...

OK, OK, never mind :-| .

If you mail me a boat, I'll make it on it X-D

*sweet*

[WesternOutlaw]

I forgot to mention the two pizzas that cost $100. That's pricey!

Why might they have taken Hink? (ok, forget that question)

Why was a map left on top of the Saturday paper? Where might an Indy map lead, perhaps Rick's Casablanca Club?

Who's the Fiddler on the Roof? The naked guy with a cowboy hat (ok, forget that question to)

Examine the details. It's all about the clues.

[ExoBuilder]

I forgot to mention the two pizzas that cost $100. That's pricey!

Why might they have taken Hink? (ok, forget that question)

Why was a map left on top of the Saturday paper? Where might an Indy map lead, perhaps Rick's Casablanca Club?

Who's the Fiddler on the Roof? The naked guy with a cowboy hat (ok, forget that question to)

Examine the details. It's all about the clues.

Well, DJ has to walk, he needs the money :-|

I thought taking Hink was the main question :-D

The map quite interesting, after hours of examining it, I would say it's a normal map :-P

Naked guy? Didn't you see he had a little bit of clothes on :-D

As TheBrickster has said, examine the clues, you will learn alot from them.

*sweet*

[WesternOutlaw]

I thought taking Hink was the main question :-D

I say we just write off our losses and have a block party! Or is everyone still out to sea on the Good Ship 007? Who's up for some pizzas? I think we have $100 left. That should get us at least two pies. :-D

[ExoBuilder]

I say we just right off our losses and have a block party! Or is everyone still out to sea on the Good Ship 007? Who's up for some pizzas? I think we have $100 left. That should get us at least two pies. :-D

Hmm, that's a good idea, except last time we tried it, it wasn't so pretty.

You can find those results Here and Here.

007 eh? Well, I was trying out my newest MOC, it has a dual missile launchers and one went off course alittle....

[WesternOutlaw]

Hmm, that's a good idea, except last time we tried it, it wasn't so pretty.

Hmmm... Don't think I got an invite to that one laddy >:-( .

And I was going to spring for the pizzas!

[ExoBuilder]

Hmmm... Don't think I got an invite to that one laddy >:-( .

And I was going to spring for the pizzas!

Uh, you were there, you were the one in front of Shakar X-D

Well, if you can find us a better pizza place, I'm up to it *y*

*sweet*